09 May 2007 @ 08:53 pm
Ficlet: Should have, would have [ Gen - PG-13 ]  
Title: Should have, would have

Author: [livejournal.com profile] mithborien

Fandom: Supernatural

Word count: 219 words

Rating: PG-13

Summary: Just give me my gun and leave.

Author’s notes: For the [livejournal.com profile] awdt prompt: “Do you think I’m stupid?” This is probably the shortest piece I’ve ever written for [livejournal.com profile] awdt, and probably the most vague. No spoilers, just ponderings...

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The clinic room is cold.

In fact, the whole town is cold, absent of people and full of fear. But here in this room, where there are lights and smooth surfaces, it’s even colder because there are still people here.

The room echoes with the sound of Sam’s fist hitting the examination bench, a sound of anger and frustration and desperation.

“This is the dumbest thing you’ve ever done.”

Just give me my gun and leave.

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Outside is even colder. Dean is chilled to the bone and chilled to the heart. His gun is warm in his hands. He hasn’t let it go for far too long.

“Just give me the gun, Dean. Please.”

Sammy pleading is an awesome sight to behold. He’s all puppy dog eyes and fragile expressions; six feet of vulnerability.

“Please, Dean.”

He raises the gun, lines it up right between Sammy’s eyes, blessedly clear of darkness but Dean realises that this must mean something worse.

“Do you think I’m stupid?” Dean says.

Sam sighs, looks down and his whole demeanour changes. Shoulders straighten, fingers flex and there is just the hint of a smile, no a smirk, to his face when he looks up again.

Dean curses, his reflexes only human and then he isn’t cold anymore.

You should have given me the gun.

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[identity profile] alias_chick.livejournal.com on May 9th, 2007 05:12 pm (UTC)
I'm not certain I understand it all, but I sure as hell like it!! Awesome job! :)
[identity profile] mithborien.livejournal.com on May 10th, 2007 11:43 am (UTC)
Thankyou :)
[identity profile] tehuberfangirl.livejournal.com on May 9th, 2007 07:24 pm (UTC)
Ohhhhh....:O! ebil sammy! *meeps and clings to dean plushie*
[identity profile] mithborien.livejournal.com on May 10th, 2007 11:45 am (UTC)
Thanks for reading :) I'm sure Dean has a way out of this. Well, ninety percent sure...
[identity profile] tehuberfangirl.livejournal.com on May 10th, 2007 02:48 pm (UTC)
lmfao! nice quotey XD
Lark_ascends: SPN - Sam[personal profile] lark_ascends on May 9th, 2007 10:31 pm (UTC)
Oh, freaky.

Evil Sam! Got to love him.
[identity profile] mithborien.livejournal.com on May 10th, 2007 11:44 am (UTC)
You can't not love evil Sam.

Thanks for reading :)
[identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com on May 10th, 2007 02:04 am (UTC)
Nicely done. I like the contrast between the two sections, and the ending is appropriately chilling.

Favorite lines:

Sammy pleading is an awesome sight to behold. He’s all puppy dog eyes and fragile expressions; six feet of vulnerability.

Great description.

Dean curses, his reflexes only human and then he isn’t cold anymore.

You should have given me the gun.


Oh, Dean. *whimpers*
[identity profile] mithborien.livejournal.com on May 10th, 2007 11:44 am (UTC)
Thanks for reading and thanks for your comment :)
[identity profile] andrea--88.livejournal.com on May 12th, 2007 02:18 am (UTC)
Ooo I love evil Sammy... How will Dean get out of this one?
excellent :o)
[identity profile] mithborien.livejournal.com on May 12th, 2007 12:01 pm (UTC)
Thankyou :)
[identity profile] jamie2109.livejournal.com on May 13th, 2007 03:05 pm (UTC)
Very chilling and I don't even watch the show, lol. I did like it though. Well done and lovely to see you back writing for the awdt. *hugs*
[identity profile] mithborien.livejournal.com on May 17th, 2007 10:07 am (UTC)
Heh, thankyou :)

I always get ideas to write something for [livejournal.com profile] awdt each week but they always turn into these longs fics and I never end up finishing them :(
[identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com on September 10th, 2007 08:17 am (UTC)
Ohhhh, oh no! Is that what I think it is?!

*Weeps*

*Is horrified*

*Hugs*
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